If they ended the game, What are they waiting for? Again one that could use some expanding.

and wait? i dont understand that part but the rest is good

This was so sad. I don't physically hurt myself, like cut n stuff but I know people who do.

sounds very sad.. its just a lil short to me?

And wait they shud reword the end - but i liked the short and sweet factor of it plz comment and vote on some of mine