short but pretty incredible. lovely.

"Afraid that each breath of the present I take my become my last."

I think you mean "...I take MIGHT (or may) become my last"

Anyways, I like it.

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Yea, that is what I meant. Thanks for pointing that out. and thanks for commenting!

Wow...that was deep. A poem like that makes people stop and think! It made me stop and think.....

Great job...

~*~Christina~*~

Interesting poem! 5

no prob...just tried to help avoid confusion....I am pretty easily confused...anyways, this poem really is great.

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