Interesting one. Lots of thoughts. I like the way it ends with alot of questions.

I agree with Wintersolstice...lots of thoughts. It seems like you just wrote whatever was on your mind at the time, and thats perfectly fine. Because it lets readers see past your writing and into your mind.

Take care,
Renee

it kinda shifted thoughts... started with your lack of a muse/inspiration... then went into other stuff. dont get me wrong, it still rocked! 5/5!!!!

i tend to shift thoughts....thank you :)

xxx

I enjoyed reading this poem.. good work.. don't worry you have time .. things get better..

Nice poem rose.. I think that we all shift thoughts everynow and then lol... me n u r just froofy :) 5/5!

thx for the advise. i try and be there for him as much as i can but its hard b/c we like a half hour away from each other. but he knows im always here for him.

this is another great poem ur go talent. keep up the great wrk. 5/5