Wow....that will leave a person speachless.
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Great poem! And one that I think a lot of people can relate to. The London explosions, 9/11....Just when you think it's a dream....you realize it's not!

Awesome!

~*~Christina~*~

wow! great poem! But I have read through many of yours and they are all very good...You should be proud! =D

WOW that was an excellent poem! 5 I hope to hear more from you! kEEP UP CUZ U GOT A REAL TALENT 4 POETRY!

I love it! so much meaning that is soo true!

wow...breathtaking... keep up the amazing work!!
Ariane
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brill. well done.

i deff...like that poemmm

I LUV UR POEM..XCELLENT!!!!!!!!

XXOXO DINA

mayb u can read sum of my poems sumtime

I LUV UR POEM..XCELLENT!!!!!!!!

XXOXO DINA

mayb u can read sum of my poems sumtime

I loved the way it flowed and I also love the ending.. Very nicely written.. 5/5 none to less.. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

*> : PainOfOne

Wow...I'm speechless. Amazing poem. It deserves a 5 for sure!

this is an amazing poem...i gave you a 5.

This poem is a wonderfull one, and again you bring feeling to heart, not only dose this poem have a wonderfull flow and rhym to it, it has dark meaning, i love this poem it was a great job, and there is no doubt that you took allot of time and effort on it.

"Agonies Final Scream"
the title..."Agony's" more appropriate I think, I'm pretty sure you were indicating ownership, not multiple agonies.

same goes for the last line
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"Your weak right to the core "
"you're" not 'your'
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I thought the imagery and descriptive diction was very well done, and captivating enough that I didn't notice the rhyme scheme at all, though it played a large role in constructing the powerful rhythm.