awww, this poem is sooo great !! keep up the good work and i hope everytjng works out for your friend and she should be happy to have a great friends like you . keep up the good work 5/5

now that was interesting and original...great work.

xxx

this guys sounds like a bastard. and if he is then your friend is better of without him. my mom raised me alone and i think she did an ok job. if this doesnt kill your friend it will only make he the strongest she can be.

hey omg i so totally luv that poem.. its the best i read in forever.. omg i luv it... u really know wut ur writing about and i like it... u must thought really hard for that... that was awesome... keep up the good ass work!!!

God damn! That got me pumped! You show that jerk whose boss! I felt that wrath through the internet. Shit!

Thank you everyone. xxx

wow i liked it alot and it was very deep

that is so sad and i think that if i was in ur position and he did that to my friend then i think that i would have already killed him. so what ever it takes make sure that he gets his for what he did. this poem was really good and i think that that u should keep on writing. 5/5. also if u could comment and read some of mine. thanx.
*stacy*

wow... just wow

like what everybody esl said great poem and you put your words together really good....hpe that guy dies a painful slow death....5/5

Wow