True love

by Kimberly   Jul 9, 2005


Love is a beautiful dream
that tears you apart from the scenes

puts butterflies in your heart
gives you hope nothing will tear it apart

makes you think it will last
unlike ex's in the past

love gives you hope
makes you feel like you can float

but soon it will end
you'll be right where you began

hopefully this cycle will pass
then you found true love at last

hope you all love my poem, tell me how you feel about it. thanks, Kimberly (15/F/SC)

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  • 17 years ago

    by Bloomed Rose

    Beautiful. that was really good. I added you to my faves. I think I'll do ok with my friendship. it worked out ok in the end.
    Thanks
    -Bloomed Rose

  • 18 years ago

    by Jay27

    Hi there, long time no see. Hope things are well with you, good to see that your poetry continues to improve. this one was beautiful, Jay

  • 18 years ago

    by Brian n Josh

    hey, i really liked the poem! it flowed well. looking forward to see more from you kim!

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