Comments : Trapped

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    a bit gloomy there...I like it, but this line confused me, perhaps a typo: "What to year tonight"

    i can relate...to the first part at least...hope you're okay...catch me on msn sometime...

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    gr8 poem hun but didnt u originally make this as a song? either way it was very good xox

  • 18 years ago

    by ASPHYXIATED

    This was very well written! I loved the last stanza so discribtive! Its sad yet a good read! i enjoyed this alot well done x

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Good poem