YAY! I adored the end of this poem. Just... wow. Great great great. I was all sad through it, then at the end, I was like, score! :)

Lylas!

*!*Rhubarb*!*

Wow, this is such a magical poem, its so enchanting with the beauty queen, but her feeling so much despair. Brilliant! I really hope you're alright hun xxx

wow wow wow wow i wishi could write like that, thats all i can say!!!

i'm fine... dont you dare do anything, sierra... dont you DARE

aww..thats soo good.u write alot of truth and u put it together soo nicely.keep it up!!
-mikki

Very good poem and remember God is there when noone else is to answere your questions and prayers. Nana loves you

Omg, thank you all SOOOO much! :-D. I'm glad you liked it because me being who i am, I was going to delete it because I'm so freaking self critical!

Thank you all so much!! Love you all lots!

~Sierra

beauituful...beautiuful
much Love, God bless

Nick

that was sweet!! God Bless
Amanda

wonderful poem!! amazingly and yet brilliantly written..i absolutely love it!!

5.5

love & hugs

great poem keep up the great work 5/5 crissie

Wow what a beautifull poem! great message and so true!
blessings courtie

Good message..i like it. xxLISSA