Just walking

by Vegetable   Jul 9, 2005


Just walking
not feeling
heart aching

Just walking
not talking
almost fainting

Just walking
not fearing
barley breathing

Just walking
not caring
my fate dawning

Just walking
not dwelling
slowly fading

Just walking
not mourning
emotions wrenching

Just walking
not hearing
pulse racing

Just walking
not lagging
eyes tearing

Just walking
not flushing
now lapsing

I can't keep walking
not moving
I'm collapsing

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  • 18 years ago

    by Rusted x Heart

    I really liked this, you manipulated the repetition very well. It wa svery well structured and was just very nice to read! good job!

  • 18 years ago

    by M MEM

    This is so good, so powerful. very good job. ive started walking, and i just couldnt stop, i didnt want to go home, it was sad

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