Comments : Take My Breath Away

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    o my wow i love this poem sooo much it's like what i was feeling you put into words you did such a lovely job on this poem oh my i can feel it so much keep it up girl you really did find something your good at 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Hayley

    wow. i love this poem!! its sooo good. it really describes how love is and should be! keep it up! hugs-hayley

  • 18 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin

    That was a wonderful poem, very fluent, well written, and most importantly, it came from the heart. Take care and keep writing...

  • 18 years ago

    by ¤Brenda¤

    Aww so cute! I liked it:)

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    your work seems to have a nice flow to it all...and pretty lengthy yet organized with the short lines and....very nice. I like your style.

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Nee

    amazing poem Hun
    Keep your work
    Good Luck
    Nema
    XoXoXoX

  • 18 years ago

    by Kassie

    That is an incredible poem. You are an awesome writer. Good job. 5/5. Check mine out if you would. -Kassie

  • 18 years ago

    by leonel calderon

    i thought that thaT was a great poem u wrote!!!! im new and im workin on some poems!!!! im a big fan!!! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Thanks! xxx