Family

by Bibbitt CSI537   Jul 10, 2005


The knob is slowly turning
as i open my sisters door
bloody towels everywhere
with blood on the bed and floor

i quickly start to panic
i go against the corner wall
slip down to fetal position
trying to forget everything i saw

tears start streaming down my face
i run out my sisters door
go to the corner in the back room
and sit there on the floor

my moms beds right in front of me
above my heads the phone
the place I'm ins so little
and I'm feeling so alone

i grab the phone and dialed
555-5510
Jeremy picks up the phone
and answers me "hello"

"Jeremy..."i try to say
but nothing does come out
what I'm going to say to him
i have yet to figure out

since so far i haven't spoke
cryings all i do
and now he speaks up,
"what happened to you?"

"Becka...Becka's in the hospital"
I'm finally able to say
"She...hurt herself but much more deep
shes at...the hospital today"

"everything will be OK
shes going to be fine
mariah wants to talk to you
don't get off the line"

i still have not stopped crying
as i stay on the line
mariah says hello
and asks why i am crying

i told her everything
the how the where the when
every single thing i said
they'd try to help and they would listen

Jeremy got back on
and told me to get calm
i tried i really tried
and he asked to get his mom

he told his mom the story
than she got on the line
she asked me what hospital
and if i needed a ride

i told her it'd be helpful
and id appreciate it so
Jeremy got on the phone
and said,"shes about to go"

i was told to talk to him
until his mom got to my home
finally she got there
and i hung up the phone

Dina Donna josh
were all standing outside
and tried to make me feel better
as i got in my ride

she drove me to the hospital
and there i saw my dad
and i must say that that one day
is the worst day Ive ever had

Mrs b left the hospital
no reason for her to stay
she got back into her car
and she was on her way

i truly love this family
that helped me at this time
they listened and they helped me
this deed i cant repay

I'm writing this poem about them
Jeremy, mariah, their mom and dad
because they treated me like family
at a time that was so sad

*this is a true story and I'm not quite over my sister doing that but could you please comment, whether it be good or bad*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Megan

    That was a really great poem! Hang in there! Keep it up and good luck in the future! I gave you a 4/5! Please check mine out!

  • 18 years ago

    by Bibbitt CSI537

    by the way thats not the real number, in case you didnt get it. but if you want to say something to the family heres the link for jeremy's myspace

    http://profile.myspace.com/index.cfm?fuseaction=user.viewprofile&friendID=19103219&Mytoken=20050711004245

    tell him what ever you want