Comments : Love is where you are... !

  • 18 years ago

    by Atomic

    Nicely done my dear. I'd appreciated it more if you had put spaced between a couple of lines, that'll make it more easy to read. I enjoyed it.

    Mt favourite lines were:

    "Whenever there's a helping hand,
    or a word of encouragement,
    whenever there are cheerful thoughts,
    or hope thats Heaven-sent,"

    ( )_( )
    (='.'=)
    (")-(") Arrivederci!

  • 18 years ago

    by Andrea

    Aww i love it. its soooooo cute.

  • 18 years ago

    by Esmeralda

    Beautifully written poem i loved it i wish i could become a better writer just like you! if you can check out some of my stuff!

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    Sweet...can't think of anything...just sweeeeeeeeeeeeet............

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    I think I read this one too but never voted on it. Nice job. not my usual style

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    .....Wow that was absolutly a wonderful poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Wonderful poem dear, Think I have commented before. =D Doesn't matter nor hurt to comment more then once. =D

  • 18 years ago

    by Anthony

    Gerat poem. I like the way it flows and everything ^_^

    ~Anthony

  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    Wow ameila I absolutley loved this poem u put into words what soo many people have no idea how to say. I absolutely loved this poem.. it had a certain romantic quality about it that jus tingles your heart when you read it. Your an awesome poet and I cannot wait to read more. your are def. on my favorites!. 5/5!

  • 18 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow awsome poem. I loved it. keep up the good work.

    ~ItalianStallion A.K.A. Joe~

  • 18 years ago

    by NannO

    Awww.. that was so cute and touching.. i love ur words, ur rhyme, and evrything about this poem here.. amazingly beautiful
    keep up the gud work
    Nannoush

  • 18 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    Awww, that is such a sweet poem! I loved the flow and it was so well-written! Great job, keep up the GREAT work!
    Love always,
    ~BJ~

  • 18 years ago

    by x Saiya

    5/5, great job! I love your writing, keep it up. =)

  • 18 years ago

    by fallentears

    This is such a sweet poem. Keep it up xxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Katlynn

    I really liked this one. very cute and very sweet. i love it. keep it up. keep on writing. amazing job you have done here. love always and forever.

  • 18 years ago

    by gorgeouslilmissy

    Fantastic x

  • 18 years ago

    by Jesse Ray

    "whenever there's someone glad
    to walk with you a mile..."

    That just got me to smile. I mean whenever I see my parents fight, they'll still go walking around the park together. And I'm happy for them.

  • 18 years ago

    by fallen angel

    I really loved the flow of this poem and the way the rhythem was kept steady all the way through. keep writing.

  • Oh my god.this is amazing i loved everyword of it i know 4 a fact that u deserve a 5/5 and thats what i gave you...keep up the great work...

  • 18 years ago

    by Lydia O

    This was a very sweet and lovely poem. I really enjoyed it.

    I was happy to see the helpful advice offered by Natalie84 and very glad that you apparently accepted it. I didn't see the poem previously but, judging from the comment, I know it could only have led to an improvement. I know that not all criticism is helpful but too many poets are resistant to accept any advice. I have to admire those like you who do. 5/5.