This is a really sweet poem. keep up the good work.

Emma5/5

Nice job, beautifully written. i love ur work. 5/5

Beautiful poem. I thought this was a really sweet poem. Keep writing.

Awww this is so freakin sweet i almost cant take it!! i love it so much you did a very good job on this poem....5/5

I love this poem,its really well written. keep it up.
love Tara-Kay

Awesome work, this poem had great flow and emotion.

Awe, this poem is,, i guess the word is cute? It brought a smile to my face.
Great job.

I love this poem...but as you can see, my love life isnt so lucky...ive lived for a while now loving some one that says they love me back..but doesnt show any feeling at all, she acts like every thing i say doesnt mean a thing...she only cares about herself and i know it...but ill always have feelings for her...but i loved that poem..gives me an idea of how i might feel someday...thx for letting me read that

This was very beautiful, I cant write love poems, so I tip my hat to u=)

You really have alot of talent Amelia. This poem just works. Very good. 5/5

This was so beautiful! aload of emotion structured into this piece. Kat

The repition works for you but I think the exclaimation point works against you. Maybe because I'm not fond of them sinc ethey tend to repersent shouting. The words are really nice and beautiful.

if you can please read: The rag doll

What a heartfelt poem.. Really tugs at your heartstrings definately made me smile. Its so hard to see love when we live in a world with so much hate but you really expressed what love is really about. Awesome and amazing job once again!

--emotionless.19*

Awww so sweet :]

This poem is so sweet and so beautifully written. I love it. The whole poem is so original, it has a different approach to the theme. And the end is perfect.
Great job. 5/5
Keep writing.

I really love this poem becuase this is what i feel deep inside about my friends and there lives if i can make there life better my life is complete. I like the symetry(however you spell it) and the visual you get from this the only thing I wish it had more flow.

Very sweet!

Wow I love the flow of this poem. . . The repetition has an excellent effect. . .Well done 5/5

Laura
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Aw, beautiful, like all of your poems. keep it up!! ill be checking for new work!! hehe

much love and many kisses,
bex

Awww, very good. very well written and structured. be proud hunni x x x x x take kare x x x