Very good poem, Love the ending, very good flow, I really enjoyed it, Great work, 5/5.

I luv it! This poem made me smile =) I never was good a rhyming but you just perfected it!
5/5!

BEA-uuu tifulll wrkkkk... u have some gr8 poems .. but i gues this ones the best... hats off.. to you... keep on writin...

Amzing piece you have. . I have nothing to say. Great job

Yet again another great poem you sure have got lots of talent how bout sharing?! Lol

Loved the ending 5.5

I loved it :]
you write really well <3

Love,
Lisa Marie