Standing In The Rain

by Ben   Jul 10, 2005


I stand in the rain
With all of this awful pain
Of misery and lost hope
Holding a slipknot rope
You stand there looking at me
As if you cant see
I put the rope around my head
Knowing that I will be soon be dead
I take my last breath
Now i don't even fear death
You don't even make a sound
Even though my body will soon be in the ground
You once said I was the only one that mattered
Now all that did was make my world shattered
Please save me before it's too late
You're the only one that can change my fate
One final tear falls down my cheek
As I am finally put to sleep

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  • 18 years ago

    by TinyDancer46

    that's a really really good poem... you're very talented, make sure you keep on writing.

  • 18 years ago

    by -] Nobody [-

    Nice poem mate...very creative....haven't seem many hanging ones around :D:D