wow this poem was so sweet, keep up the awesome poem writing

Lucy***

This is really good but for the last part I would have:
Pray that your happy
Pray that you knew
How much I truly loved you

I think it just flows a bit better, but you might disagree :)
Good work though xxx

pretty good... i like it...
~meg

ThATS SO AWESOME..i FEEL THE EXCAT SAME! I even stopped eattina nd I am startin 2 get an eatin disorder bcuz of mi X:'(

Wow thanks guyz. Taddy, dont worry you'll move on. Try and get help, You'd be surprised how many people are there for you. And Purple Fears, Ill change my orginal. Thats much better thanks!

Good poem!

aw thats so touching i no how that feels....great poem 5/5!!