Have you ever...

by jaki   Jul 12, 2005


Have you ever had the feeling that the tears you are crying are burning
that you are aching instead of healing
and from your mistakes you are slowly learning?

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  • 20 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    I would say short and sweet, but everyone eles has. i got the feeling waht you showed us was almost a direct outlet to what you were feeling. it was lovely. once again out standing work

    ruby

  • 20 years ago

    by ZOMGEMO

    short, but sweet and meaningful... 5/5 from me =D

    Stay Strong ^_^

    *..KimiC..* XxXo0oXxX

  • 20 years ago

    by Shelby G.

    Definatly lives up to the "Short and Sweet" saying. Wonderfully written, and so touching.

    (My appolagies for not returning the comments sooner, Issues came up. but thank you for commenting)

    -BlackBird

  • 20 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    omg this is short simple and very awesome. love it!

    ~PLP~ lil slam~ i'm goning to be gone for about three weeks but any comments you give me in that time i will return when i come back~

  • 20 years ago

    by Peggy

    Good Poem I have felt that way!! Keep up the good work

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