o my god! is this true!? im so sorry if it is... but anyways... i really think its the best poem i have EVER read! this is only the frist poem i have read from u but im excited to read more and im sure that they will be great! make sure that u read mine and tell me what u think! 5/5 i loved it!

I like this poem, i realy like the first two lines. they hit a personal note with me. It is very sad. I love how its starts to sound like a breack up, and then, its about how she passed away, and it killed you to lose her. It is just a wonderful poem. One the best i have read on this subject. nicely written. great use of imager to link the ideas.

Very good poem! It flowed nicely like all the other poems you have written!

Once again I have to commend you on your gigantic talent. My only nitpickings...Third line from the end "where" should be "were", and throughout the poem you change from "she" to "you", though I'm assuming they're both the same person you're referring to. I suggest fixing that, it's not a good habit or a proper thing to do in any form of writing.

But otherwise it was a very, very good poem.

oh, is that true? its so sad!
hey its me hun, i tried emailing u but it didn't work. i miss u so i read some more of ur wonderful poems, i really like this one. whoever the girl in the poem was she must have been very lucky to have u.
rock on, write always,
*hugs and kisses for u*
luv u more than chocolate milkshakes,
<3 *rach* <3

Very good.Your good at writing.