I MISS YOU!

by adessa   Jul 12, 2005


When i say i love you
i am showing that i care
and i want you to know
i will always be there

we said we would
be together forever
and i thought it was true
when i not with you
i don\\\'t know what to do

you make me feel so happy
with everything we do
and i really want you to know
\\\"I MISS YOU!\\\"

dedicated to:
Johnny J

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  • 16 years ago

    by No one

    I really liked this! It was short and sweet, and its got really good flow.

    Just one little typo in the middle, other than that, its a good piece!

    Take care,
    Lizzy, xxxx

  • 19 years ago

    by Angel

    I loved it!!I know how you feel my best friend is moving away and I do not know how to tell her i am going to miss her!!But you have a good way expressing your self!!grat job!!!!!

  • 19 years ago

    by Letty

    Great poem, but it was kind of hard to
    follow . You have your words bunched
    together . You should try to open up
    more and add more feeling . But don't
    get me wrong it was great . You also
    have a few mispelled words you might
    want to correct . I hope my critisim is
    not bothering you because I make
    those same mistakes sometime . I just
    let them make me a better writter . I
    hope you write some more soon,
    because I would love to read more of
    your work .

    Your friend
    Letty

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