Oh wow...I was hoping you'd end up together at the end. :)

I love how you put a good ending on it and not a wretched feeling if you weren't together. Very sweet! I thought the together part would be over doing it but you made it work. You changed the last line to every stanza a bit so it worked well.

Another nice write! :)

Very well done! Beautiful and you used great emotion! Take Care! Brooke~

This poem was really sweet... Im starting to love your poems more and more lol. Anyways I liked it alot! keep it up!

Another awesome poem. You are really good at writing love poems!

awesome job! i loved it

Beautiful poem...thank you for the kind comments, I appreciate it :)

xxx