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I can relate alot to this
5/5 keep it up
I like this but again I think the repeating line was added too many times. More details would be better. Though I like this as many will be able to relate to. :) Take care
love it i feel like that most of the time which is really sad to noe ri? well thnx for your comment
That was an awsome poem. Keep it up!
Very well written nice flow! So much said with using just a few words! Take Care! Brooke~
WOW! Short and to the point. IT flowed great too. 5/5
by Cory Mastrandrea
Simple and easily understood. Can pertain to anyone the way you wrote it. good job.
i like i like the repeating line, it could use a little more description but it was good easy to read... good job
Excellent poem! i ahve also faked a smile soo many times.. jus to make other people happy.. or to try n hide my pain.. anyways great rhyming n great job!
by undying blusher
Seems like a similar style I saw on your other poem...I like it. I wonder if you could do more with it though... keep writing ;)