Comments : Behind this smile

  • 14 years ago

    by cowgirlstar26

    I can relate alot to this

    5/5 keep it up

  • 14 years ago

    by Natalie84

    I like this but again I think the repeating line was added too many times. More details would be better. Though I like this as many will be able to relate to. :) Take care

  • 14 years ago

    by Bredada

    love it i feel like that most of the time which is really sad to noe ri? well thnx for your comment

  • 14 years ago

    by TragicRomance

    That was an awsome poem. Keep it up!

  • 14 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Very well written nice flow! So much said with using just a few words! Take Care! Brooke~

  • 14 years ago

    by themeuneverseen

    WOW! Short and to the point. IT flowed great too. 5/5
    Much Love
    ~*hAiLy*~

  • 14 years ago

    by Cory Mastrandrea

    Simple and easily understood. Can pertain to anyone the way you wrote it. good job.

  • 14 years ago

    by Kia

    i like i like the repeating line, it could use a little more description but it was good easy to read... good job

  • 14 years ago

    by Britney

    Excellent poem! i ahve also faked a smile soo many times.. jus to make other people happy.. or to try n hide my pain.. anyways great rhyming n great job!

  • 14 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Seems like a similar style I saw on your other poem...I like it. I wonder if you could do more with it though... keep writing ;)

    xxx