That was an amazing poem. I wish my father put that much passion into his children. Your son is lucky to have a father who cares. But do me a favor...Take your own advice in the poem...And follow every word you said in that poem. Actions speak louder than words and your son will learn more from your actions that words. But great job!
Love, lauren lee

Aww thats adorable
very excellent poem

That was so awesome and so sweet! You are going to be an awesome Dad!

Congradulations!!! That was an awesome poem, I cannot wait to be a parent!!!!

WOW omg!! thats soo adorable! It was so well written aswell, keep up the awsome writting! much felt. 5/5 :D keep smiling n congratulations

-xXx-

OMG this is amazing...ur such a good writer... im like speachless haha...well keep it up...u have a lot of tallent

I can't even begin to express how wonderful this poem is. It's beautiful to read so much love. Well done. Congratulationas and good luck as a parent...its the most wonderful thing in the world.

wow such a good poem... please keep writing casue i love all of ur wrk.

LOTS OF LUV
SHAWNDA

awwwww this is mad sweet. is this true?? cuz if yes CONGRATULATIONS MAN! ur gonna be a great daddy. much love!
-PassingAngel

that was a great poem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

i can tell your a good writer!!!!

I love this poem.I'm so happy that you love your unborn child sooo much.I hope that when I'm ready to have a family that my man will love his un born child just as much.

I feel obliged to comment on this poem just to make it 100 comments instead of 99...it was very good *salutes*

Love Koo

Aww. Lol I hate that 'word' so it means a lot when I say it.

That was beautiful!

-Razor

That was a really good poem. it made me cry, i was pregnant with twin boys just recently and i had sooo much planned for them and i loved them more then anything but when i was 6 months pregnant they passed away. Cherish every moment u have with ur son wheather he is in the womb or not b/c u never know when time will run short.

wow this is very good. I hope you have a wonderful life with your son I am having a blast with mine and he has just turned one.
Tina

I am so impressed, i honestly thought that was such a thoughtful beautiful poem. It was so carefully done, and it flowed so well. I believe that every word should have its place, and it definitly did. I loved it, and you are a really good writer, keep it up. And this is an incredibly sweet thing, if your not already taken ... there are MILLIONS of women searching for a man like you .. to open doors for them and put them first ... and write poems.. its incredibly sweet.

it was a great poem !i really enjoyed reading it !!

great poem! i like it-like it! 25/5! =)

holy piss that was good. do u rele have an un born son?

wow, *speechless* lv A, x