Do you ever wonder

by erely   Jul 14, 2005


Did you ever feel like life was passing you by
And you were just a spectator on the other side
Even though it is filled with drama,fears and tears
None of it by you, was actually engineered

And as you go through the motions day to day
You realize that more of your time is slowly slipping away
As you reflect back over the years
Are you amazed at how it is,you got to be here

Do you ever wonder in your head
About those words you never said
Would a little I love you have changed a life for you
Or those feelings that you felt were they really,really true

Did you let the opportunities go by
Because they seemed ridiculous or you were shy
When your feelings were so strong and just sorta came along
Not making any sense did you decide that they were wrong

Did you ever wonder why your life is passing you by
Did you ever stop to think,it's because you have been unwise
If you didn't deny what you did feel and all you felt was real
If you stopped and made a stand,wouldn't you be in command.

Written by LG

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  • 18 years ago

    by ~@ngel Whisperer~

    Wow! I really like this one. I can relate to this so much! Thank you for sharing! God bless!

  • 18 years ago

    by Pilar

    Omg, i feel sooo identified with this poem, i felt like it was me the one writing it down on paper. it's amazing. i wonder everyday about what i didn't say or do, and absolutely feel like life's passing me by. u described perfectly that feeling, congratulations u are an amazing writer. it's a shame that 5 it's the higher rating cause it deserves a 1000

    take care.

    adios!

    pili

  • 18 years ago

    by rachelle

    You're a great writer. thanks for the comment. maybe i'll get to be a good writer like you someday. keep writing =D

  • 18 years ago

    by Laffalot

    Wow good job...i really like this poem...its pretty kewl!