Madly in Love

by Kane Burden   Jul 14, 2005


Skin like porcelain
Afraid to touch
Eyes as deep as the ocean
gleaming like the sun.

When i hear your voice
Simple words cant describe it.
You leave me dreaming in metaphors.

Your just too good to be true
How can i be worthy of you?

Skies are always clear
Chasing rainbows in my sleep
Birds singing songs for us
You make me feel complete!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Ana Vidovic

    Aw very sweet classic love poem! Keep up the great work, actually i dont even need to say it, cause u always do!:D

    Take care luv,
    Ana*

  • 18 years ago

    by Sabine Taylor

    Wonderfully written. The first stanza is my fave, because it's has some Cinderella style-

    See you soon again
    Lots of fun :D
    Sabine

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristine Søndenå

    sacry Kane, scary.... ITS TO DAMN GOOD:D

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    Are you sure you're single? You sound like you're in love, it's hard to believe you're not!

  • 18 years ago

    by blackrose1011

    WONDERFUL! I like this poem alot, the lines where you talk about dreaming in medaphores is a good line. Like it alot. However, the poem dosent seem to be very diffrent from millions of others. good work, but find something to make it unique!

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