A question at hand

by blackrose1011   Jul 14, 2005


Take my hand-
draw me in-
lips roam across my skin...

I need you!
don't you see?
my eyes plead-

slip you hands,
along my thighs.
chills-can't control-
this natural high.

my mind is racing
give me something-
anything-
to keep my mind on.

don't let go of my hand
(you better love me)
kiss me, please?

I want this, I truly do.
I'd do anything to be with you!
hold me, please?

You, darling, are all I need-
I question though-
everything I've given you-

In an instant we became one-
but after a life time-
will you still love me-
this passionately?

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  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    Wow... you are talented... I think this poem was amazing and so well written.. you did an amazing job just with the emotion and it flowed perfectly... nice job and keep it up!

    sammie

  • 18 years ago

    by natalie

    Oh that is wonderful i really liked it
    As for a title,
    'after a lifetime?'
    again i dont know

  • 18 years ago

    by Not Bulletproof

    o0o0o0o I love this one too! Very unique, like the thoughts that would run through the mind once with this person, and over time the thoughts continue to the point where you worry, thinking nothing can be this good. But don't worry love, it just might. =) Keep your chin up, and keep writing, you're a great poetess I've come to see.

    -Mortalidaga
    xxTakeCarexx

  • 18 years ago

    by Chad

    I really like this poem, it is very good. =)

  • 18 years ago

    by EoB

    This poem is fairly good, but lacks that special something...It doesn't stand out, if you understand. To many similar poems on this site.

    As for the title, I think Hold Me would be quite fitting.

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