That's a really great poem and it's so sad! Poor little boy!!!

This was a sad poem, but very good!

-Taylor

Wow that was a sad poem but it was great i loved it!!!!!!!!!

Whoa sad again u know u can write a novel with these ideas

Very sad, but very beautiful words. By the way thanks for commenting on my poem.

Awww

My friend Elvia and I love this poem. She says "HI" hehehe It was a really touching poem.
Lovest Shannon and Elvia :)

Ur brilliant. u really are! u should try publishing some of these when ur older honey. bless u,
dani xxx

Thank you so much for your comment it mean s alot and I think that your poetry is excellent in everyway you are a terrific writer and I hope you never stop writing.5/5

~Chelsey~

This poem is sooooo sad when i first read it i thought i was gonna cry, u r a really gud poet keep up the gud work -x- kay kay -x-

Omg is poem is so sad its really good keep writeing

Sad and have a strong power behind this. I'm sure there's another story behind this...Keep it up!!

HeYYY! I LOVED THE POEM IS WAS SAD. BUT IT WAS REALLY GOOD. TTYL BYE DREAMER101 (brittany) bye

Wow i like this it is sooo sad and great man keep up the good work 5.5

This Is Such A Strong Poem It Made Me Cry The First Time I Read It
Keep Up The Fantastic Work
Your Greatly Talented
xx

Oh my god, this almost made me cry... I haven't read so touching piece for a long time. This poem is so wonderfully written and it left me completely speechless.
Ending is great.
This piece holds many emotions and I enjoyed so much in it.
You're really talented.
5/5, but this poem deserves much more

Aww..
thats so sad but soooooo good
keep up the good work

That's so sad ..... i love it i wish when i cry i can say it's just the rain but people tell when i cry haha

So i know you know this poem is so good considering the amount of comments. but it gave me chills, that still wont go away...

amazing job!

Oh my, that is reaallllyyy sad