that was really good..one of my favorites of yours i do believe!! i loved the way that it flowed.. very well written.. you're a great writter dont let any one tell you you arent!! on the other side of things.. i told you that wasnt one of my better ones.. lol!! i think you will like my Red Rose poem.. it flows alot better than most, at least i think so.. lol.. bye bye EJ

this is a very good poem, with a pretty good flow, but the rhyming was a little all over the place...otherwise well written and good job! keep it up!

I'm honestly not into dark poems, but I loved how you wrote this one. The rhyming was very even, it flowed very well. Your an amazing writer. Your poems are filled with so much feeling. Keep up the amazing work. xX

Ravishing story!~*~!

really loved your poem well done!! mwAzz stephy :):)

It seemed to be a very well thought out poem, and very well written. Kept me very intrigued the entire I read it, and I could definately feel the power of it's emotion. Once again, i thank you for another good read.

Alain

Great use of imagery in this poem, which added to the rhythm, creates an excellent poem! Nice work! By the way, welcome to the club :D Kind regards from Kane

Oh so original loved it well done

It's a good thing you added the (C) or I would have run away with that one.

wow great poem 5/5 very freaky..i thnk i like this one best but im not through reading...lol...keep it up...!!! luv yas mwah

-kayla-

This was so amazing..i dont know exactly what to say about it. But it was a very good poem...it had alot of description My favorite part is "i am paralized, i can neither stay or go" its soo good..and reminds me of alot of aspects in my life.

Wow awesome job! I cannot say that i quite relate to anything of this nature, but it was an awesome read. I enjoyed it.. it flowed so nicely all together.. you have a great talent with words.. so keep using them lol.. aka keep writing i would like to read more of your work. 5/5! excellent.

wo great poem! im kinda not into reading dark poems but i really liked it

wo great poem! im kinda not into reading dark poems but i really liked it

wow, amazing, have a 5

wow this is an incredable poem i hope you keep wrighting

I rule
Because I can.

Omg, great line!

I didn't much like this, and yet I did...but I did love the second paragraph. It just drew me in for some reason...

DarkSuicide

Great poem 5/5 great choice of words and rhymin
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Another powerful poem. I liked your use of diction especially in this one. The first stanza was fantastic. These lines "Even though he's tall, when
He speaks, he grows" are perfect, simply perfect.
The way you tell your story through the poem is very effective and you have a great style. The ending was good too...
Well done, keep writing.

ps If you have time please stop by mine sometime, thanks.