its nice !

really good poem. you're an amazing poet.
much love,
marjan

Rose,
Very well written. In reality i think so many people feel that way about themselves. Anyways i esp. liked this part! "Rather than wasting my time,
I should work on what I think of myself
After all, that’s what it is really about—"

Becuase u were rite it doesnt matter what others think, except what u think of urself. 5/5! great job!

Wow, i like this.. its amazing & people can relate.. 5/5 :)

Great Poem, no need to worry about what others think though, they should be worrying about themselves, as you should be, rather then worrying about what they think :) Great structure to the poem, kind regards from Kane

That is a really good, poem. It made me think a lot about what others opinions mean to me and why, so thank you for that :D

great poem! i like it-like it! 25/5! =)

wow. im actually speechless. in your poetry you write about things and feelings that are relateable and understandable. 5/5
xx
paulette

OMG I love it =D.. *remains speechless..* Damn. I envy you so much you dont even know..

that's another really excellent poem, you've got a talent for this!

Good poem, for some reason i get the idea of you standing on a stage behind a podeum(sp) i think that you would be there and you would try and tell people this poem but they don't seem to understand. In someways it reminds me of church, you listen and pretend to know what they are talking about but your not quite sure if you got it all.

I think it is a good poem and your a wonderful writer. Very well done.

I like the fact that you write down alot of stuff that pertains to life in general. You don't put it in a story, or hide it in a metaphor (those are cool you just dont do that). You take life issues and write about them outright. That is pretty cool.

an exellent description of self examination. In other word who gives a sh**!! I liked it, I feel the same way more often then not good job in portraying it...

again great poem

This is really good. It's like you took what everyone on earth is thinking and put it in a poem. I'm sure everyone who reads it can relate. good job

I really liked it. I found that it was a really good poem and it summed up how most of us feel around the time. Wonderful grammer, talented writer. I told you that you would just have to keep your chin up and i am sure that people will notice your writings.

Signed,
Dark Savior Aka A lonely Soul

P.S. thanks for commenting on my poem, i am glad to return the favor. I don't think i will ever get an answer to that poem but i am sure i will...as you say someday when i meet someone, i honestly don't think that day will ever happen. But here's to hoping i am wrong. Why arn't you on MSN anymore?

You are such a good writer, I really love this poem

I like this because the fact that so many things are just out of peoples hands is a realization alot of people need to have. people try to fix things that they just cant and they drive themsleves crazy doing so..... 5/5