you are an excellent writer, wow, 5!

good work, i can feel the emotion!

great poem! keep up the good work 5/5 =p please check out some of my poems, thanks =)

who are you to tell me I have no creativity. oh boo hoo, you lost a boyfriend. go trip on a rock and die!

I LOVED THIS!

Nice...nothing much to say, it's too good to have a comment.

I'm impressed with your maturity of not only subject but also style.I was writing around your age(mainly songs for our rock band that never happened!)but nothing this good.You show great promise.I'll be back to check some of your other pieces out soon.
peace/love,
Gary