Something really weird...

by Nicholas Kerst   Jul 16, 2005


AUTHORS NOTES: This is something really different from what i usually do...i am not expecting any of you to like this...but i decided to try it anyway...so please tell me what you think. This is mostly metaphorical...Tell me what you think this is about...

No one is known,
To Travel the unknown,
And the burning fire will soon die out,
So they expect you to believe,
What you cannot see,
And eternal life will await thee?

So they lie about the truth,
Not knowing we are ruthless,
And what they say means nothing,
Cause we will die anyways,
So don't forget to slit your wrists,
And give them one last kiss,
A kiss goodbye,
A kiss to finish the lie.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Nice...sounds...well I don't know how to explain what that meant to me but I thought it was nice.
    "A kiss goodbye,
    A kiss to finish the lie."
    Great lines...very great lines....
    ~The Unforgiven

  • 18 years ago

    by Forsaken Redeemer

    Hey this is a REALLY amazing poem, i especially like the last bit

    So don't forget to slit your wrists,
    And give them one last kiss,
    A kiss goodbye,
    A kiss to finish the lie.

    that's my favourite bit in this poem, which, by the way, kicks some ass ;)

    xXx

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    I think it looks like a death note to me, nice try, keep writing.

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