Train
by dude Jul 16, 2005
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Why when i pierce into all these strangers eye's on this train . . . everyday. I can only sadness, pain, regret, fear, hurt & pure depression. I find myself on this train . . .everyday. only with one small difference, I'm searching for it in someone else's eyes . . . HAPPINESS. Yet not one have I found. |
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17 years ago
by Marjan
The bad thing is that people have not learned how to find happiness in the little beautiful things that add beauty to their lives. that is sad. it makes me sad to see people sad :(
Marjan -
18 years ago
Aww I hope you get happy 5/5
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18 years ago
Never have i rode on a train.. maybe one day i will so i will know what you mean.. good poem tho..
love Tiffany Heather -
18 years ago
by aaron c s
i love ur style of writing in this one. it feels like ur talking to me. great job.
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18 years ago
by dude
wow thanks girls. i didnt think i was that good at writing. its amazing you all understood so may differnt aspects of the poem. ty
