I share in your pain. Straight to the point. I like it. :)

I like the question at the end...gets you right into at the end as well.
4/5

everyone feels pain at spme point in their lives. sometim,es its uncontrollable but instead of thinking of all the basd things think of the goos things like your friends who love you very much, never let pain get the better of you for thats what god wants xx

hmm.. ending could be better
but good job

hey, thank you for leavinf a comment :)
i like your poem :)

Very Deep and meaningfull. I like the way you based your thoughts around one word, "pain". Kind regards from kane

yea, as sad as it is cutting is all of that.

Good one, I like repitition and use it in most of my poems. 5/5

Short but to the point!
Nice! xxx

very good poem, feelt just a little short;S

Best wishes,
Patrik

Thanks for the comments! You really shared your pain with me through that poem! GRETA JOB

This poem really shows a kind of desperation. it is the kind of poem that speaks to people. i loved it

thanks for your comment. it ment alot.

with regards
Ruby

Yes, it had real meaning to me. i know how that feels... awesome job

You share the exact pain of me.... Please read/comment on some of my poems too.... My poem "Don't Think I'm Not Listening," specifically has to do with some of the same ways you feel as well... I will be here to listen, if you ever need anyone...

You're a great writer....and poet! Keep up the excellent work!!!

((((((Big Hugs)))))

Michelle

I feel this way sometimes, unfortunatley. great job. 5/5.

Excellent.. It was short but said alot! I love the repetition! Great work, keep it up!
bec xx

The only thing I would suggest is making your i's upper case *a pet peeve sorry* otherwise this was excellent, sad but true to life.

So truthful, 5/5. :)

Meaning is what poetry is good for i thinks, nicely done, good work =) good meaning