Givin up

A bloody razor
a girl in pain
a girl who drives her self insane
a scared soul
a broken heart
thats what keeps
her and god apart
a dead mom
an abusive dad
thats what makes
her life so sad
thinking of a way out
i note on the floor
a locked door
an over dose
now the end of her life
was now close
this was her choice
to lie there dead
this is the final words she had said
i hate you all
thats why im gone
and i know you hate me
it was obviose to see
now all i haft to say
is good bye

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