Wow that is really beautiful and i liked the way its written :D

i love it! great job explaining the emotions that capture the moment!!!!! congrats 5/5

wow...that was great...alot emotion and it flowed so nicely great job 5/5

It seems to me that through most of it you're speaking to God...faith is important and love is amazing...

"i hold you tight as the flames ignite" - I see you fit the flame in this one too...nicely done ;)

You have such a gift for poetry...never stop writing!

xxx

beautiful piece.. gr8 emotion.. excellent wording..
keep it ups!!
nouna

yup the girl in the forum was right this poem is awsome ... well done 5/5