i really love the imagery in this one. it sets a very vivid picture. good work.

♥

very kool

very kool

very original. loved it lots
~lindsey

Oh my....Emma that was spectacular!!!!!! It's just....wow..the imagery, the flow!! That has to be one of the best poems I've ever read!!!!! Good job, hun!! Keep 'em coming!!!! :D

~Sierra

WoW! That poem has so much imaginary power! It was written beautifully and has great flow. Keep on writing! I loved it!