Another reason I may not want to become pyschic...

a really dramatic poem, with an interesting idea - i like it!

I really don't like mentioning of blood or anything...but I had to keep reading...boost that self-esteem up, you have reason to be proud of the
artistry you have shown...and I am only on the second poem.

"rain is the predator and I’m the pray."

I believe you mean "prey" ^ And I think it would sound better if you wrote out "I am the prey" - just a suggestion.

xxx

Here you are...with us...this poem is one of its kind and it's very nice...michael...stay strong...luv ya...