Not yet

by ღtheღcrunkღpirateღ   Jul 18, 2005


It’s a hot day
but my soul is chilled
my mind is numb

my hands shake
fingers struggle to grasp
the knife falls from my hand

I cannot do it,

not yet anyway

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  • 18 years ago

    by Michelle

    WOw. pReTtY gOOd! weLL eXpReSSed! gOOd jOb! i'M pRouD of YoU!!!

    hUgzzz!!!

    miCheLLe

  • 18 years ago

    by aaron c s

    I've definately been in that situation. that was so strong yet so short. i liked it.

  • 18 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    Short and sweet
    lovely poem
    nice description for such little amount of words

  • 18 years ago

    by John (Mr. Whuppy)

    Very depressing but good
    if i wer'nt a man i'de cry

    p.s.
    hope thats not how you feel

  • 18 years ago

    by Carlee Ann

    powerful for such a short piece. Great work, keep it up and you'll go far. God Bless,

    Car

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