The One

by TragicRomance   Jul 18, 2005


Is this how true love's supposed to be,
When you're the only thing I ever see;
I lie awake so late at night,
Thinking how this feeling is so right;

The feelings inside are nothing but real,
And this is how I truely feel;
You were the one who was always there,
The one who was never afraid to care;

I'm saying that I love you and you need to see,
I'm giving you the best of me;
I've never before felt this way,
But with you I feel it every day;

You are the one who was always around,
Catching me when I was falling down;
You showed me what love was all about,
I can say I love you and never have a doubt;

You believed in me when no one else tried,
If it wasn't for you I think I would've died;
You are the one that I would give my heart,
You were there streight from the start;

You came into my life and made it so much better,
I know I'll always feel this way forever;
When I think back on how this all began,
I know I would do it all again;

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lydia O

    This is really outstanding. It is the most beautiful love poem I have read in a long time. You have a few technical errors but the poem is still a gem. It is well expressed, has good rhythm and flow and a pleasing rhyme scheme. This is one that will beckon me to re-read it again and again. Thank you for sharing it here.
    —Lydia O

  • 18 years ago

    by kiesha

    Nice poem. I know how you feel. Keep writing! Take care.

  • 18 years ago

    by *NiCoLe*

    great poem...very talented keep writing...don't ever quite..5/5