I really liked that and I can DEFINITLY relate to that one...life is ironic like that isn't it...I think it's because we'll never truly know what we want without second guessing ourselves...great poem...but one suggestion, the rhythm is a little off in the 2nd to last stanza...it just changes some. Great poem and keep up the great work!!
xoxo-Sierra Rae

This is really a sad poem, but I like it alot, keep writing.

wow i can relate to this poem.

you wrote it very well kept me intrested all the way through.

Jacs
xxx

very good poem Amanda.
wish you the best,
marjan

really sad poem but true enough meaning xox

That was REALLY good. and it had a good point to it too. awesome job. 5/5