Promise of Forever

by blackrose1011   Jul 19, 2005


Voice:
calls to me through the speakers,
echoing in my thoughts.
How you speak of forever.
Here the strings resit a melody
tell me you love me...

Eyes:
seem to glow, brighter then the stars-
Even when there shade turns;
(brown to green)
I know you love me...

Lips:
so soft and sweet-
draw across the skin-
smooth and right as they kiss
telling how you want this...
show me that you love me.

Hands:
(my favorite part)
go everywhere, they choose to-
and have far more courage then you!
gentle, as if handling porcelain,
lay down your girl
and love her,
with the promise of forever...

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  • 18 years ago

    by XxBlackRoseKidxX

    Hey Hey, from what I read, this poem was ur best one, it was really good. I liked your technique. And thanks for the comment on my one, I appreciate it :). Oh look, our names are so similar hehehe yay

  • 18 years ago

    by William Flores

    what can i say? i love how you write! its a very unique qriting style. beautifully done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lindsay C

    This is very good. Beautifully written! Great job! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Josiah Larson

    Great poem and it was diffrent to but loved it!

    Good jobz

    -Josiah

  • 18 years ago

    by Chris

    wow. great poem it's different than how most people write but great job!!