Lost beneath the room above

by Kane Burden   Jul 19, 2005


Tragic, is the definition of my life
I feel all the love, like an Endless pain
Tears dripping from the heavens Above
But nobody seems to care.

Pictures designed for a purpose
Running through my mind
Colors seem meaningless
When black and white describes my pain inside
But nobody seems to care.

Lights shining in the room above
Always distant, leaving me in shadow
Haunted by the man behind
Buried in expectations
But nobody seems to care.

Red Paint dripping from the walls
Door open a jar
Battery dead, my soul is lost
But nobody seems to care.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kristine Søndenå

    Kane :D Long time :( Didnt reseve a message from you since ages :/ and my mobile is empty for money ;/ but i`ll send to you as soon as I can :) I can see that you havent put some new words out here! Dissepointing! Well, i havent done it myself but :p hehe... Not good!
    Lots of love

    Speak to you soon :)
    Have fun Sweety!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristine Søndenå

    Kane :D Long time :( Didnt reseve a message from you since ages :/ and my mobile is empty for money ;/ but i`ll send to you as soon as I can :) I can see that you havent put some new words out here! Dissepointing! Well, i havent done it myself but :p hehe... Not good!
    Lots of love

    Speak to you soon :)
    Have fun Sweety!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kristine Søndenå

    Nice work Kane;) Hope to here about your trip in Germany as soon as your back;D Låw ju hønn

  • 18 years ago

    by Sabine Taylor

    You're wrong, a lot of people care, like you can see ;-), because this is a grand piece with its emotions showen as a picture. The metaphors are great, so keep it up ....

    Lots of love
    Sabine

  • 18 years ago

    by BrokenMisery

    You have a incrdiablestyle, you tell emotion behind a story. I immensly enjoy your work and look forward to reading more.

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