To relive the memories-

by blackrose1011   Jul 19, 2005


To sleep-
that would be a welcome thought
to end the thoughts of this week
and dream of him-
oh welcomed sleep.

Dream of him-
and how he dreams-
how his eyes dig so deep.
Dream of him-
the memories-
his only thought am i alright?

To recollect upon the hours-
spent alone in his room.
to re-live every kiss
and see every action played
again and again-

To sleep-
would allow good time-
to dream of him-
to comprehend-
what i gave up-
the promises said-

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  • 18 years ago

    by William Flores

    wow i like the structure of this poem very much! its something i've never read before. very nicely written and touching too.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lindsay C

    Really beautiful! 5/5..keep it up!

    plz comment on mine as well!

  • 18 years ago

    by miracle

    Hi! this poem really has a nice flow I think it's really good of you how you writed this a lot of people cant ( including me ) i gave you a 5 to show you how much i appreciate it
    Well done,
    milou

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie84

    Very unique. The style is very different than anything I've ever read but I do like it.

    I will say that an Untitled poem is a lazy poem. Normally I'll NEVER read poems that are untitled. To ME that's a sign that you didn't take it seriously....that it didn't mean that much to you. If you didn't take it seriously and it didn't mean anything to you then why should it to me...? Hope you understand what I'm saying. I read it because you left something to the affect of yes in the thread...lol Just a thought....Keep that in mind as I know many people within this site who feel the same way.

    Anyhoo....I loved this. If flowed nice and sounded good without rhyme and I love that!

    Nice write!!

  • 18 years ago

    by SarZz

    hey..this poem indeed is very cool....keep it up..izz a masterpiece....

    adios