omg that's amazing! that's an awesome write... it's so, story like, your work's really original... I'll have to check out some more of it. Thankyou once again for your comments, I'll be keeping an eye on your submissions.

emma x

Hey, thanks for all the comments. You've been a tremendous help, really. you've light up my world..thanks:D

This poem is original and I think Mild Inomnia descirbed it pretty well. I also like your emotions here, it's intense and raw. You're pure and raw talent

Keep it going!

thank you so much!!! it means the world.

wow. That poem was awesoeme! you are very talented

awesome poem!!! 5

Hey, wow that was really good..i it's so real. This is really original, it's so different from other poetry on here.
I'm gonna go and check out a load of your other stuff now !!!
Thanks 4 commenting on my poem, i really appreciated it.
XxX Charli XxX ~*~

Enjoyed it immensely, I love the narrative style. You are a gifted writer, keep it up.

Warmest regards,

Steve

You truly have a special gift. keep sharing it with others as we can all take something from it. Thanks for allowing us to feel the emotion within

amazing poem 5/5 ur very talented

love mark xxx

wow.. that was brilliant! awesome job! 5/5

Wow. amazing. 10 times excellent. really makes you feel like your there. good description. 5/5.