Suicide

by ღkristenღ   Jul 20, 2005


She went to the B-day party
and had lots of fun,
but before she knew it,
her life was done.

She was offered a drink,
and she said "sure",
not really thinking about
what would happen to her.

As she was driving home
in her car,
she didn't see the truck
coming from a far.

Well, now it's all over,
her life is in the past.
She was only 16,
she died so fast.

Her family will really miss her,
but they know she's not very far,
she's right up in heaven
shining from under her star.

She's watching over them
night and day,
making sure that
they'll be OK.

I see her standing there
alone and depressed.
What happened to this girl,
to make her life so messed?

She thinks about suicide,
it's always on her mind.
Why is her happiness
so hard to find

Sitting on the table,
she sees a gun,
with just one shot
her life would be done.

She picks it up
and puts it to her head,
with in a second,
she was dead.

Her family and friends
sit home and cry.
They loved her so much,
why did she have to die?

They thought she was happy,
they had no clue.
They could've helped her
if they only knew.

Now as she sits there
watching from above,
she never knew
she had so much love.

She looking down
from up in the sky,
wishing so much
that she didn't die.

She wants to go back,
she wants to see,
if she hadn't killed herself,
how her life would be.

This is what happens,
lives get taken away.
People feel that the just can't
make it through another day.

So when you have a bad day,
and problems get you down,
talk to someone, try to be happy,
and most of all never frown.

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  • 18 years ago

    by .

    KRISTEN OMG I CANT FREAKIN BELIEVE YOU DID THAT!!! AHHHHH IM STILL IN SHOCK! I STARED AT THE WALL FOR ABOUT 45 MIN. GOING OMG OMG OMG...AND YOU BEAT...UH YEAH YOU KNOW!! WOW..THATS ALL I HAVE TO SAY..WOW...WOW...NEVER IN A MILLION YEARS WOULD I HAVE GUESSED THAT OH MY GOD!! I NEED TO HAVE A LITTLE TALK WITH SOMEONE! AHHH! YOU JUST LIKE WENT RIGHT TO IT AFTER YOU NEVER DID ANYTHING...YOU DID EVERYTHING........I HOPE NOBODY ELSE KNOWS WHAT IM TALKING ABOUT CUZ THAT WOULD PROBALLY SUCK!! WELL GUESS WHAT...WE BOTH WON! WHOO HOOO BUT I WON FIRST HEHEHEHHE BUT CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN..WINK* HEHEHEH WELL I NEED TO HEAR THE DETAILS SO CALL ME 7813176 IN CASE YOUR IN SHOCK TOO AND YOU FORGOT MY NUMBER! HAHAHAHAHAHHA WELL...HEHE I HOPE YOU PUT CERAN WRAP ON THE POPSICLE STICK!! OR ELSE YOUR GONNA GET BEATEN BY ME! HEHEEHEHEHE OK WELL YOU BETTER CALL ME MISS! OR YOUR DONE FOR! ILL TELL THE WORLD ABOUT HOW YOU BLEW UP THE PIE IN THE OVEN! MUAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHA....LATER SA LIKE ME HEHEH BUT YOU DONT KNOW WHAT SA IS MUAHHHAHAHAH OK LATER! HEHEHEH

  • 18 years ago

    by ღkristenღ

    thanks!

  • 18 years ago

    by Sing me another sad song

    OMFG!!! that was like a freakin awesome poem, i mean it!!! it was so freakin good!!
    Love, Jessi

  • 18 years ago

    by .

    that was..wierd...some girl dies then some girl kills herself i thought you were talkin about the same girl for a sec..but she was already dead..oh my whatever lol it was really good thought! 5/5 loved it
    *BECKY*