That was reli gr8.. i loved evry single word thx 4 the clear-up.. some wud need that :) i lkd ur rhyme, never forced, but describes eactly wat u wanna say,.gr8 one u got ther
keep it up
take care

Wonderful poem. Very refreshing. Thank you.

Oh god! This was magnificent! EXCELLENT! I admire you so much. It You have incredible talent!

Wow that was a wonderful poem i loved every bit all the imagery its beautiful!

Extremely beautiful.. ^^

Taste the liquid crystal sky
The sweetness of the night
Feel the depths of darkness cry
The stars are tears of light

this is the best part that i like.. you are so talented.. keep your good job..
5/5for sure. ^^

This is EXCELLENT. You make writing wonderful poems sound so easy, and U intorcuced us to some new words.:P Good Job. 5/5 for you.

Magnificent poem! The imagery was amazing, the flow was incredible, and the essence was spectacular. I just loved it. Great job:)

Cor blimey, im amazing!!!!!!! HA HA HA, MWA HA HA HA HA!!!!!!!any way....

Im not commenting for a third time *looks around shiftily* i just wanted to say that i really really really love this one, and its my fav! ok...im done...ill leave the comment space for people who havent commented more than there fair share.

Hmm.... you have a very great variety of words! I know alot of words but I didn't know those three. I loved the poem though. It was well written and makes one want to stop and think. 5/5

If you ever have the time, please rate and comment some of my poems. I would love your insight.

Really nice, i loved the flow

I loved this poem you are a great with poems, and very talanted.

Aww man this is so good! It's nice to finally find someone on here who can actually write well! I especially liked how all the lines are in time with each other, it has a really nice rhythm to it.

Awesome work.... i love it. props!
5/5*

{BX girl}

I loved this poem! It's very descriptive and detailed. great job, keep writing! 5/5
~*~Katie

Wow.. i mean.. WOW.. this goes beyond words.. no exaggeration there.. i cant remember the last time i was this speechless about a poem ive read.. ur rhyme is perfect, and so is ur flow.. i absolutely love and ive definitely ennjoyed the imagery displayed om ur poem.. this is, hands down, a piece of art..
keep up the talent
u rule :D
take care
NannO

Beautiful...

Wow excellent poem so beautifully written x x x x welldone x x x x

Amazing poem, you truly have a talent, keep up the superb work, you're doing. Check out some of my poems when you have the time.

Best Wishes
Wallace

Incredibly written poem. It has powerful atmosphere and imagery is outstanding. I really like it, well done! It deserves 5/5