oh that poem is amazing, oh welldone
its really sad tho, and i hope things get betta for you.
goodluck xx

this is a great poem...i luved it....great job!!!!!!!!!!!

I am deeply sorry for your pain. You will be in my prayers!!!

♥ Always,
Carrie

wow thats a amazin poem.... i loved it
its heaps sad though
but keep writtin ya really good at it :D
take care
- xXlostXx

then like everyday
daddy enters what he doesn't know-

isnt it always the way for parents? they really have no clue. lv A, x

thats the best poem I've read so far on this site..very good
and well..u have alot of pasion!..laterx

I used to have the same promlems but with my step dad then one day i faught back we were standing in the hall he was about to hit me again but i kicked him in the chest n he fell over the banister and down three sets of stairs he broke three ribs his ankle and he cracked his skull open he hasnt beaten m e since
great poem 5/5

this is soooo good, and sad i really now how you feel hey im or e-mail me some time and read my poems

That is very good. Sad but good. Keep up the good work!

Woah..That was..amazing..Im speechless. Sounds like you got it hard, I hope things get better! Stay strong!!

My love always,
x0x*Kat*x0x

HEY,
Greaty job, wonderful writting 5/5
sad but so strong and powerful.
i really liked u're poem...

its a very good poem
the flow of the story was there
you captured my emotions so strongly
i hope this isnt a true story
but if it is im truly sorry
u can always look for me if u need some1 to talk to alryte
please dont do anything harmful alryte
it really isnt worth it because i used to be like that too but i held on and found my way through and im glad i had not given up on myself or the people who caused me the pain
take cares and stay strong
Lots of love
[[lostlllsoul]]

thats really...deep. i'm so sorry if this is the case and you go through this. there's nothing i can say that will make it stop, but try and be strong within yourself to be ok
keep writing..i voted 5/5
*hugs*

thats really...deep. i'm so sorry if this is the case and you go through this. there's nothing i can say that will make it stop, but try and be strong within yourself to be ok
keep writing..i voted 5/5
*hugs*

Oh wow, powerful story :) I absolutely love it, despite the fact that it is sad and true for many of the lives of children these days. The abuser doesn't realize that what he's done will come back on him ten fold....In what ever way he may pay the price, just like in this poem. Wonderful write hun, keep your head up and keep on writting. Cheers!

Fallen

wow...that was amazing!!!... it seriously brought tears to my eyes. i'm sooo sorry you have to go through all that. No one deserves to go through that...but please stay strong! and keep up the great writing...
always---
michelle

Golly that was amazing! I really like your writing you have amazing talent!

*Brooke*

Hey!!! Wow, this is an awesome poem, I loved it . . . it's really well written!!! Hey, if you get the chance, take a look at some of my poems and comment and vote cuz it would mean the world to me more than you know!!! Great poem though . . . 5/5 for sure . . . keep writing!!!
*Lisa*

wow... very good poems though... it is very sad... i am terribly sorry for that...i hope u be strong....

Im sorry if this is truely happening to you. I wish i could help and Im praying for you please please know that God is with you. is there anyone you could tell
about whats happening. Please dont hurt your self. You can talk to God about anything at all, he'll always be there.
Godbless & your in my prayers
erica*