according to semper fi i don't give you honest opinions cause you kno i will never be as good as him, as he would say, but anyways great poem...i read this already but its really good...nice ryhme scheme!! 5/5

Awwl that was really cute! you must like him alot. Good rhythm though, keep up the good work! 5/5!

i love your poem well hey r/c on mine too!

awww, 5/5 it was really good. <3

Cool poem

love your is so cute it shows the meanin of luv thnx 4 da comment