by Squinkey Jul 21, 2005
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Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
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You tore me in half, and didn't even say thanks for the ride. you made me cry and didn't even say sorry your leaking. you didn't even turn around when i screamed your name. have you ever noticed anything beyond the sheets, or past the bank? didn't think so. so here i go to tell you. I'm done with you. i don't need you to use me. and I'm not going to be there just for your convenience. I'm done with you. |
by Vegetable
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Not too bad. After I joined this site, I found that I was addicted to writing. So this poem was ok. You should separate it into lines and stanzas so it doesn’t look like a paragraph. good work. |