Done with you

by Squinkey   Jul 21, 2005


You tore me in half, and didn't even say thanks for the ride. you made me cry and didn't even say sorry your leaking. you didn't even turn around when i screamed your name. have you ever noticed anything beyond the sheets, or past the bank? didn't think so. so here i go to tell you. I'm done with you. i don't need you to use me. and I'm not going to be there just for your convenience. I'm done with you.

OK...this is my first one for this site...i wrote alot already today...so I'm all out for the night...this is all i had left in me...but ill have better stuff later on...

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  • 19 years ago

    by Vegetable

    Not too bad. After I joined this site, I found that I was addicted to writing. So this poem was ok. You should separate it into lines and stanzas so it doesn’t look like a paragraph. good work.

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