Kane...that's a sweet poem, I hope it isn't true though...I'm not really into the last part, but, it does fit! This flows very nicely! Great write hun!

Lovely flow...I can somewhat relate to this...wonderfully written...

"The passed can not be erased."

*past

xxx

wow...beautiful!!! i love when you say

"But the time has come and passed
The lost can not be undone."

...amazing! im really sorry this happened to you. take care and stay strong.
-xXx-

hey really good... can relate exactly..except a guy ran away with my best friend:S but same idea!!
hope ur ok
x x x

wow i really liked it...it reminds me of my life and i can relate to this poem alot! very nice job....keep writing u have a good talent!

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I loove this poem. It is so metaphorical and shows a high degree of passion! Amazingly well written!

Much Love,
Ana*

Very lyrically written that in such a way this makes your poem unique from all the other love poems about lost love. I also like the constant form, the second stanza is my favourite.

Keep up the great work. Thanks for commenting on my works :-)

Lots of love
Sabine