Last words

by K1n9d0m   Jul 22, 2005


Suppressed by my darkest fears
Soaked in my own blood and tears
This isn't how I wanted to be
But now I know I'll never be free
Trapped forever in my misery

I can't go back...
It's just too hard...

Lying here I know (it's just too hard)
I'm thinking of you (but I don't know who you are)
I want to be drawn to you (...no!)
(but I don't know your name...)

I want to give
(let it)Take over me
I don't care if I'm never free
Cuz I won't live to see...

Waiting, I'll give up my ground soon
I'd talk, but all my words go unspoken
Hold out your hand
I feel your presence

Screaming into the darkness
I am blind (would you be so kind...)
To...hold out your hand
Make this pain end

Lying here I know (it's just to hard)
(to live on...)
I want to be...drawn to you...

I wanted to give up
I still do
...I can't go back...
...It's just too hard...
I want you to take over me
Leave me running blindly
It doesn't matter what happens now
Coz I'll never live again

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  • 18 years ago

    by Dorotea©

    I agree with Sean Allen, you could use a lot better words to portray the poem. Instead of using slang, use unique words. Other than that, this poem was nice. I'm glad you're in our club, welcome!
    Dorotea

  • 18 years ago

    by Sean Allen

    I liked this poem a lot, my only criticism is that you didn't need to use "cuz" and "coz," you could just use "because" and "since" or whatever, there are plenty of words you can use.

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